I want to open a movie with a dude in a handcuffs with two goons above him- FREEZE FRAME: "This is me. You're probably wondering how I got into this situation?" Cut to two seconds earlier of him being pulled into room. HIM: "Yup, dragged in through that door and shoved down."
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Might as well talk about story function! The reason people try to use flash-forwards is because it puts a feeling of intensity at the start, a way of saying "don't worry audience, this WILL get exciting!" But not only is that artificial conflict, it often hurts you.
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Because what it does is set an expectation in the audiences mind of what to expect. Rather than emotionally being involved in the action of the story, they sit there thinking "Huh I wonder how we'll get back here? It makes it a cerebral experience instead of a dramatic one.
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More over, it often puts a stamp on the fact that you can't actually come up with a story that has conflict at the start, so you just hide and tease and hint at, and are probably hiding a lack of function in your story in general.
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Can it work sometimes? Yeah sure, of course. It works in Iron Man because it's a way of emotionally telling the audience "don't worry, this cocksure jack ass is going to pay for his behavior soon" and it ONLY lasts like twenty minutes of screen time.
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Again, everything has to be ingrained in dramatic story function. Don't hide under artifice. HULK OUT.
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This is my only gripe when it comes to John Wick. That opening scene with him climbing out of the jeep super injured. And the script isn't written with that open, it plays out as chronological. It's interesting to ponder at when the decision for the flash-forward was made.
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Its often fear-based. “Oh no is the audience gonna be patient?”
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One of my teachers was talking about flash-forward scenes and said something I found interesting: the only way they work is if the scene from the future is so baffling (in a good way), the audience will not want to stop watching until they find out how that scene came to be.
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