Brent Friedman

Final mission is a laughable very bad, because without plan they just luckily escaped and they just said. Let's kill that Nazi Scum and for info there wasn't any of the Japan Lend-Lease in 1945 and Germany forces would use weapon from team, not keeping them.

Final dialogue from main villain was copied from Christoph Waltz character, that he said that with valuable info they will keep him alive, which is happens in normal situation and they keeping alive, but those clowns just killed him, because again he is a NAZI SCUM.

Or as Polina said FASHISTKAJA SVINJA. Very cringe. I'm very curious how you and your colleagues wrote story and dialogues. You really thought, that it would be like: YEAH. THAT'S AWESOME. VERY COOL. TAKE THAT! If it was like that, you should not never write.

But with writing like that you and your colleagues should be fired and never never let to write anything for games, comics, books and etc. This is level of the 2 grade young school, where children players with action figures or maybe lower.

I'm feel very sorry for all Star Wars fans that they will get very poor written KOTOR Remake.

But if you still will be writing and you want that your writing will be not 0 out of the 10, my recommendation will be read at least book Story: Substance, Structure, Style and the Principles of Screenwriting from Robert McKee and watch old classic movies.

Thanks for all the free advice. I’m curious what classic movie you suggest I watch in order to learn how to actually write?

Charlie Chaplin, Alfred Hitchcock, Sergio Leone, Stanley Kubrick, Martin Scorsese, Orson Welles, Akira Kurosawa, Steven Spielberg movies for example. If you will watch those movies and learn how they were created, you will have an understanding of why they are great.