fishdesmith
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@ I went too hard on this poem. I'm still chewing on it. The perils of going hard early, judges sometimes mess it up.
9:02 PM Aug 2nd, 2011
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@ My pleasure! I missed seeing you!
8:56 PM Aug 2nd, 2011
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results: 4th Punch Out Poetry, 3rd MN Quest for a Voice, 2nd SlamMN, 1st Soapboxing!
7:45 PM Aug 2nd, 2011
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Dylan SlamMN: being parted from a loved one. Great craft. Strong delivery. Astronomy shout out is a win for me 9.3
7:41 PM Aug 2nd, 2011
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Chance encounter with a person who entwines love and abuse
7:38 PM Aug 2nd, 2011
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Hassani (?) MnQuest: starts out funny but twists sharply, nice maneuver. May need some craft work. 7.9
7:37 PM Aug 2nd, 2011
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Kate SBox: whoa. 9.5 anger at a loved one's rape, scathing social crit. Good craft.
7:32 PM Aug 2nd, 2011
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Syd POP: super tight craft as usual, gods of our traditions. Very well delivered. 9.4
7:28 PM Aug 2nd, 2011
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Duo from MnQuest: PoV of hitler's sister. Seemed ahistorical and a little wandery. Voices also mismatched. Wants work 7.2
7:23 PM Aug 2nd, 2011
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Emily POP: adjusting to a transgender loved one, some nice rhetorical hooks, want moar craft 8.1
7:19 PM Aug 2nd, 2011
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6 is 9 SBox: letters from one brother to another, 1 a panther 1 in vietnam. Damn fine, Khary. 9.3
7:10 PM Aug 2nd, 2011
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Heather POP: Emo virus! pretty funny, i guess the ladies are playing the orgasm card tonight! 7.7
7:06 PM Aug 2nd, 2011
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Shane SBox: over the top hilarious things not to do in restaurants, like dump someone. 9.1
7:01 PM Aug 2nd, 2011
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MnQuest: again missed name! Funny stories of no start relationships. Okay poetry, good heart. 7.9
6:58 PM Aug 2nd, 2011
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Mnspa was actually MnQuest. Not sure how i got one out of the other.
6:56 PM Aug 2nd, 2011
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Neil SlamMN: difficult relationship with father. very good poetry, good delivery. Strong genuine emotion 8.8
6:55 PM Aug 2nd, 2011
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Neil hilborn looks like @ in this lighting
6:50 PM Aug 2nd, 2011
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Sam SBox: shots taken by snipers like nobel prizes, sign you're doing something right. Tight. bful lady part a lil clunky. 8.6 ...
6:49 PM Aug 2nd, 2011
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Michael SLAMMN: numerical piece ruminating on death. Strong poetry, good imagery. Delivery periodically overwrought. 8.7
6:45 PM Aug 2nd, 2011
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POP: comic piece with some bite on ladies' rights to decline sex. Funny, loose poetically. 7.2 (missed name, will get later)
6:41 PM Aug 2nd, 2011
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