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@Manwards No, I think it SHOULD start dark following one character - then instantly cut away to another lighter set of characters/story arc.32 minutes agofrom webin reply to Manwards
@Manwards Guess I prefer an inverted tone to the whole thing. Lightness peppered with darkness. Give me Discworld versions of Magical Girls!about 1 hour agofrom webin reply to Manwards
@Manwards I think u can have a dark prologue 2 a magical girl story, but the main story should start off a little more bubbly. Darkness l8r.about 1 hour agofrom webin reply to Manwards
@Manwards That's not what I mean by structure. I'm talking about what actions take place, when characters are introduced, revelations etc.about 1 hour agofrom webin reply to Manwards
@Manwards I look forward to discussing it in person next time we meet up. I need to understand more of the stories structure to offer help.about 1 hour agofrom webin reply to Manwards
*still hasn't gotten out of work clothes*about 1 hour agofrom web
@manjou Not at all. That's why I thought it was important to host the conversation here, so others can have their input.about 1 hour agofrom webin reply to manjou
@Manwards I'm of the mind it belongs at the beginning, but actions following should be unrelated and ideally focussed on new characters.about 1 hour agofrom webin reply to Manwards
@Manwards Frankly I imagine the difference to be between a White Paper & a Thesis. 1 evokes imagination from the reader, the other doesn't.about 1 hour agofrom webin reply to Manwards
